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[kazlaton]

mithril coyote, on 07 May 2014 - 08:14 PM, said:

Blue Serpent Arises
The Ancient Red shackles broken
We Will Remain Free

Blue free, a red gift
The dragon shed its own blood
for serpents freedom

Edited by kazlaton, 07 May 2014 - 11:46 PM.

[kardam]

The Fox once tried to make us woo
With his preposterous haiku
The Dragon raised his brow
Ready to stop the show
And said: STFU

[Strum Wealh]

kardam, on 08 May 2014 - 01:26 AM, said:

The Fox once tried to make us woo
With his preposterous haiku
The Dragon raised his brow
Ready to stop the show
And said: STFU

There once was a MechWarrior from Nantucket...

(According to Flight of the Falcon, Nantucket is a city on the planet Zebebelgenubi, and is the location of the primary spaceport.)

[kardam]

...who tried to win in Trenchbucket...

[mithril coyote]

kazlaton, on 07 May 2014 - 11:44 PM, said:

Blue free, a red gift
The dragon shed its own blood
for serpents freedom

weight of single kind act
cannot balance scales against
seven centuries

kardam, on 08 May 2014 - 01:26 AM, said:

The Fox once tried to make us woo
With his preposterous haiku
The Dragon raised his brow
Ready to stop the show
And said: STFU

Poetry Without
Clear Pattern or Smooth Grace
Only Grating Noise

Edited by mithril coyote, 08 May 2014 - 08:29 AM.

[kardam]

I am ashamed! As now I see
Your verses truly are OP
In my defense, I only wanted
To put some vigor in topic's content
Regardless of my poet skills

[mithril coyote]

Haiku is simple
just say your story, thought,
in five seven five


it could be worse yet
Norse prefer skaldic kennings
every line a puzzle

Edited by mithril coyote, 08 May 2014 - 10:34 AM.

[kazlaton]

Strum Wealh, on 08 May 2014 - 04:14 AM, said:

There once was a MechWarrior from Nantucket...

Well it's not haiku, and it's definitely not making it past the language filters, but I'll give you credit for humor.

mithril coyote, on 08 May 2014 - 10:29 AM, said:

it could be worse yet
Norse prefer skaldic kennings
every line a puzzle

Now you have me wanting to try skaldic kennings. I'm going to have to think about this...

[mithril coyote]

skaldic verse difficult
in form much convoluted
yet intriguing results

[Vanguard319]

mithril coyote, on 09 May 2014 - 07:26 AM, said:

skaldic verse difficult
in form much convoluted
yet intriguing results

Hmm, let's try this:

Long after the Spear-din has quieted, I sit upon a swan of blood, caked with the battle-sweat of those flame-farewelled. Before me lies a feeder of ravens, riding a slayer of giants, as fair as Sif's hair. who would fear bane of wood or the sleep of the sword when their minds' worth is challenged?

[kosmos1214]

love the poetry keep it up

[Sparks Murphey]

Rise from your old grave
Dear thread of sweet poetry
And entertain us!

Edited by Sparks Murphey, 17 December 2014 - 07:49 PM.

[Dleroq]

And maybe Legend of 5 Rings?

edit: grr... there was supposd to be a quote in there regarding trash talking and poetry in mwo.

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Edited by Dleroq, 18 December 2014 - 09:16 AM.

[kazlaton]

Sparks Murphey, on 17 December 2014 - 07:48 PM, said:

Rise from your old grave
Dear thread of sweet poetry
And entertain us!

The necromancer,
he calls to us across time
to do his bidding

[Sparks Murphey]

The fist besiegèd
By history's forgotten
The sword sends it's own

[AmaZinger]

Hawk819, on 30 March 2014 - 07:54 PM, said:

The Yellow Bird is victorious!

True story

[BlackPhoenix01]

(myself not excluded.)

[kosmos1214]

BlackPhoenix01, on 20 December 2014 - 08:20 AM, said:

(myself not excluded.)

yep but in a good way

[StillRadioactive]

kazlaton, on 26 April 2014 - 10:28 AM, said:

A haiku is 5/7/5. Your attempt is 5/5/9. Your failure has been noted.

Better commit Sudoku.

[kosmos1214]

StillRadioactive, on 20 December 2014 - 06:07 PM, said:

Better commit Sudoku.

lil typo there lol never noticed