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[NoTime]

Greetings everyone! Here goes my shallow idea of what the real participant of the Battle of Tukayyid might have though and felt during the fight. Think of it as a tiny immersive roleplay on my side. I hope you will enjoy reading it not lesser than I have enjoyed making it. I will appreciate any feedback from you, mechwarriors!

Also I would like to give my thanks to fellow members of Skye Rangers unit that supported me on the battlefield as well as on the fields of rhyme and rythm. Join our ranks and you will find an atmosphere unique in many aspects!

P.S.It is the original work based on the ideas and concepts of the Battletech and MechWarrior Online universe

[MrKvola]

Thank you!

[Sean Lang]

This is great man!

[Sereglach]

Excellent work, on all accounts.

[WustenFuchs1991]

This gets my vote for player creation of the week

[huskinater]

Amazing

[STEF_]

Good stuff!

although I was expecting something about -MS-....'cause history can change...

[Henric Pryde]

As a lifelong tabletop Battletech player of 30 years and online player for 10, I must say that is very very good. I am a bit of a poet myself and thoroughly enjoyed this.

I salute you!

[General Pete]

Bravo sir, bravo! Well done!

[PhoenixNMGLB]

Great work, thanks for sharing.

On a critical note - not sure if your false rhymes were intentional or not but it helps to be consistent. Poetry doesn't have to rhyme but try to keep to a set pattern when it does.

Of course it may just be that I have missed it!!

All criticism aside - I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.