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#1 TacoDragon69

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 05:46 AM

If your a new player and would like some help. If you are looking for casual\competitive. if you need strong leadership and want to be apart of something bigger than yourself then join the golden foxes at darkjedi.com

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 07:12 AM

You named your thread after the forum section it is placed in and which doesn't really say anything about what you want to communicate.

It would be better to name it: "Unit looking for New Players" or something like that.

And then you state your nature (casual/competitive), explain if you mainly play group queue or Faction Warfare, what time zone you guys tend to be active in, etc. etc.

I think you guys would get far more response with a well crafted post as there are indeed a good number of new players out there that would like to join a unit. Posted Image

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 07:25 AM

This thread does not belong in the New Player Forum. There is a forum for units trying to recruit players.

Also, you used the wrong "your". The one used shows possession, such as "your book", or "your car". The one you want to use is the contraction for "you are", which is "you're".

In addition, "apart" is used when something comes apart, as in breaks. You want to use "a part".

Thank you.

Edited by mailin, 23 November 2016 - 07:29 AM.


#4 TooDumbToQuit

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 08:02 AM

View PostTacoDragon69, on 23 November 2016 - 05:46 AM, said:

If your a new player and would like some help. If you are looking for casual\competitive. if you need strong leadership and want to be apart of something bigger than yourself then join the golden foxes at darkjedi.com



I'm sure he meant to go to the http://mwomercs.com/...ons-merc-corps/ page.

And Mailin really, you sound like my wife, lol.

http://mwomercs.com/...11#entry5490211

Edited by LikeUntoGod, 23 November 2016 - 08:13 AM.


#5 Koniving

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 09:21 AM

Making, unleashing the grammar (soup) [redacted] hidden within us all.

#6 mailin

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 09:30 AM

Sorry, that's the English teacher in me. Don't even get me started on to, two, too, their, there, they're and the grocers' apostrophe.

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 09:44 AM

View Postmailin, on 23 November 2016 - 09:30 AM, said:

Sorry, that's the English teacher in me. Don't even get me started on to, two, too, their, there, they're and the grocers' apostrophe.


Grocers' apostrophe? Do tell!

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 01:27 PM

View PostKoniving, on 23 November 2016 - 09:44 AM, said:



Grocers' apostrophe? Do tell!

Any time an apostrophe is used incorrectly to make a word plural, it's called a grocers' apostrophe.

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Posted 23 November 2016 - 02:52 PM

View Postmailin, on 23 November 2016 - 01:27 PM, said:

Any time an apostrophe is used incorrectly to make a word plural, it's called a grocers' apostrophe.


It sounds like a series of circumstantial predictament's.

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