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#1 SirDubDub

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Posted 10 September 2013 - 01:44 PM

Hey Cool. A new comic. My apologies for butchering the Wrecking Crew's colors, and for being too lazy to look up who did the Antares Scorpions logo (so I can give them due credit)

New pages will be going up every week on Tuesdays.

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Edited by SirDubDub, 03 December 2013 - 11:55 AM.


#2 Bishop Steiner

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Posted 10 September 2013 - 03:04 PM

It's your story dude, just glad to get the publicity. Colors are fine, since you go a simple, dynamic palette anyhow. Curious to see where this goes.

#3 Dirus Nigh

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Posted 10 September 2013 - 05:43 PM

Is it unification day, and are you going to start a bar fight?

Joking aside. Looks good. want to see what you do with this story.

#4 Valcrow

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 05:33 AM

Very cool! Love the style!

#5 Adridos

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 05:47 AM

Looks really good so far.

The only nitpick I'd have is that you could've added some really simple ladder to the mechs as they currently seem inaccesible by those two. I know it's really trivial, but I think it would help seeing them as their mechs and not just MW:O mechs thrown in next to some random dudes. Breaking the lines between mech-only and actual battletech experience, to put it more professionally.

#6 SirDubDub

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 09:13 AM

View PostAdridos, on 11 September 2013 - 05:47 AM, said:

Looks really good so far.

The only nitpick I'd have is that you could've added some really simple ladder to the mechs as they currently seem inaccesible by those two. I know it's really trivial, but I think it would help seeing them as their mechs and not just MW:O mechs thrown in next to some random dudes. Breaking the lines between mech-only and actual battletech experience, to put it more professionally.


That's actually a really good point. I'll try to make a few more human accomodations when the opportunity presents itself.

#7 Iqfish

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 09:28 AM

Really excited to see this continue!

#8 NautilusCommand

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 12:31 PM

AS I've said before.
(Yesyesyesyes All my yes)2

#9 Bishop Steiner

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Posted 11 September 2013 - 06:06 PM

View PostNautilusCommand, on 11 September 2013 - 12:31 PM, said:

AS I've said before.
(Yesyesyesyes All my yes)2

Same.

Got a Rasalhaugian rascal writing a story involving a Lyran commanded Merc Corp that will be facing off against FWL manned/aligned Antares Scorpions? I think this has some serious drama potential.

#10 NautilusCommand

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Posted 12 September 2013 - 02:34 AM

View PostBishop Steiner, on 11 September 2013 - 06:06 PM, said:

Same.

Got a Rasalhaugian rascal writing a story involving a Lyran commanded Merc Corp that will be facing off against FWL manned/aligned Antares Scorpions? I think this has some serious drama potential.

Go for it, the more fan art/fiction the better. Right?

#11 Stingray Productions

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Posted 14 September 2013 - 08:48 AM

yeah, man, these are great, the art is fantastic!

#12 SirDubDub

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Posted 17 September 2013 - 03:28 PM

MOAR BOOZE

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/260/f/8/dustbowl_page_02_websize2_by_sirdubdub-d6mpkzi.png

Edited by SirDubDub, 03 December 2013 - 11:52 AM.


#13 Bishop Steiner

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Posted 17 September 2013 - 04:24 PM

Why u make me into young kid? =P
(Just curious.... since i actually do have red hair)

#14 NautilusCommand

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 02:40 AM

View PostBishop Steiner, on 17 September 2013 - 04:24 PM, said:

Why u make me into young kid? =P
(Just curious.... since i actually do have red hair)

As I've read this I saw you as the old fart. But that's just me, being that I'm a "young'en" Just as you're the knowable type. Knowledge=age.

#15 Mighty Spike

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 03:20 AM

View PostIqfishLP, on 11 September 2013 - 09:28 AM, said:

Really excited to see this continue!

Yup,me too. Nice Work Sir DubDub -_- .
P.s:
Dont forget to PM me if you have questions about our Unit.

#16 Adridos

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 03:36 AM

View PostBishop Steiner, on 17 September 2013 - 04:24 PM, said:

Why u make me into young kid? =P


It's worth it for the irony alone... since you are going to ponder about it for quite a while, never finding the answer and never being given the satisfaction of knowing why exactly. :ph34r:

View PostNautilusCommand, on 18 September 2013 - 02:40 AM, said:

Knowledge=age.


If only that were true, the world would be a much better place. -_-

#17 SirDubDub

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 07:41 AM

Oh trust me. No one in this comic actually knows that they're doing, including me.

#18 Hebdomas

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 10:34 AM

Looking good so far. I just hope future panels have more explosions and/or dakka. :rolleyes:

#19 Bishop Steiner

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Posted 28 September 2013 - 02:28 PM

Anyone see hide nor hair of DubDub of late? I wasn't sure if he was holding off to pop it out on the Launch Party, but I haven't even seen the guy online at all. Hoping it's just minor IRL an nothing serious.

I need my fix!

#20 BlueFly17

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Posted 29 September 2013 - 01:11 AM

Something about this art style really appeals to me. I like it a lot. Can't wait to see more. Particularly more of the the mechs.





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