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[Thom Frankfurt]

Welcome to the boards, Marack!!! Question, is this to be an ongoing thing? Just curious.

[Stingray Productions]

I have two questions, just sort of curious. You said you started writing this 6 years ago, how many pages do you think this multi-series would add up to? Also, do you have any art for it?

[Stingray Productions]

Marack Drock, on 25 June 2013 - 08:41 AM, said:

Hi Stingray. I think the Series would add up to around 1000 pages give or take a few. I am actually taking down a great deal of detail in this and yes there is Concept Artwork and a Comic Strip (Which is so large you'd be dead before you finished it). Eventually I'll post the Concept Artwork for Characters. Later in the Story I also introduce some of my own Mechs which I have Artwork for.

wow, you kidding?, 1000 pages? Man, I am thoroughly impressed! Good work. Yeah, can't wait to see the concept artwork.

[Stingray Productions]

Marack Drock, on 25 June 2013 - 08:47 AM, said:

thanks man what you think of the Story so far?

I like it, I'll keep reading it and in the future post my additional thoughts.

[Peter D Hansen]

Hi I Am Marack's Bro And Theres Gotta BE More Than 1000 Pages To That Think It Is Almost Twice The Size Of The Dictionary

[Stingray Productions]

haven't seen much here for a while, you still plannin' on posting some more?

[Stingray Productions]

Marack Drock, on 09 August 2013 - 06:14 PM, said:

Hi Stingray sorry for the delays my job has been hecktec this summer. I am uncovering the dialog and scripts and it should be comming some time in the next day or so. Sorry for the delays all.

it's really no big deal, it's all cool; was just kinda' curious.

[CyclonerM]

The story's good but i have an impression i often have when reading this kind of short-novels.. I feel everything is too quick, lacking any detail. I think you should slow down your telling. It feels to me like "Marack destroys an Atlas in the simulator - Marack drops and destroys many mechs - Marack escapes from an interrogation room and gets back to his family " then "boom , two years later, hi is listed for a mission and he's ok". Stop. I could even read that all with a single breath.Too bad you'd have to write 1000 pages..