Mr. Bills (yes, THAT Randall Bills), apart from some mis-spellings, poor sentence structure, and missing words in various places throughout the text, has written an absolutely magnificent, spellbinding piece of literature.
MechWarrior Zane is one of the last MechWarrior's to come out of Clan space, on an entirely busted JumpShip and, over the course of a year-and-a-half manages to change his mind from hating the *****-joining of Clan Nova Cat to the Draconis Combine, to one looking to save both; the rites and traditions of his Clan help him come to the path his Clan is taking, and eventually he comes to see eye-to-eye with what they're doing.
The climax of the book details the attack of the Alshain Regulars regiments, except for the 11th, which is held up by Zane's Nova Cat Galaxy, attack Alshain, which is Ghost Bear territory, and mayhem ensues. During the climax Zane, whose vision of the war with the Ghost Bears turns the Galaxy he is a MechWarrior within, dies from autocannon rounds fired by a hate-filled Kurita MechWarrior.
At the end of the novel, the Clan Nova Cat Oathmaster, seeking words to rouse warriors to a fervor to make them ready for combat vs. the Ghost Bears, thinks about all the things happening to the Combine, to the Nova Cats, the war that was unnecessarily stirred and, finally, comes to an understanding that MechWarrior Zane's memory, his vision, needs to live on, to spur on the Nova Cats. He spends all of this time thinking, building up to a desire to mount a platform and begin the proper festivities, and the last words of the book are...
"...he began to speak."
I WANTED TO HEAR, DESPERATELY, WHAT HE HAD TO SAY!!! I HATE the Clans, but I came to understand the struggle of this Clan MechWarrior, and I loved what was written, and wanted to hear that speech!!! (shakes fist at the BattleTech gods) DAMN YOU, RANDALL BILLS.

This book is nearly fourteen years old, and I can't get the speech, now!?!?! Aaaarrrgggghhh
Okay, other than the things I've mentioned, I highly recommend this novel to EVERYONE!!! It's excellent, a real page-turner, and you should share my madness, LOL.