Nakamura Takeshi, on 02 June 2014 - 11:04 AM, said:
If I can offer some advice in that you make a "script" and storyboard it around your own idea, rather than conforming it around dialogue that you acquired.
One other critique and this is very minor, but I'm not crazy with the font(s) you use. For some reason it just looks odd to me. Graphics, motion, editing, dialogue, etc. rock in my opinion.
Storyboard wont work, i dont use actors, i wont accept 'new audio bits' of lower quality as they are when amateurs do it. Gamemodes maps in this game are so underplayed that it really narrows down what i can do. I hate shooting actors, tried it and wont do it again. As with how story envolves is never one direct thing, it evolves in editing and with music. End result might be very different drom the idea i started with, and i really like that. Confinding my self to strickt plan is not what i like.
Some of my text are done badly but seems like most of that is towards battle of forest colony video. And i cant see any problems with text in it. And as my vids tend to be old most of those are done in time when i was just learning how to edit. When i started this i had never even seen editing software.
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