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[baabaa214]

City Cat showing it spots.

[baabaa214]

Switched the weapons.

Which do you like ?

[Alaskan Nobody]

I think you like apricots

They both look good to me

[Bishop Steiner]

hmmmm.... I'm thinking LB-X in the arms, SSRM6s and quad MG in the torso?

[Keira RAVEN McKenna]

Bishop Steiner, on 10 May 2014 - 12:20 PM, said:

hmmmm.... I'm thinking LB-X in the arms, SSRM6s and quad MG in the torso?

I like his idea... But the 6 launchers look lost in the big boxes soooooo as they are ever tracking things why not have a blister thing in the middle with all the tracking gear? That would fill out the plain looking boxes.
And make the Shotguns look evil with burnt barrels and the Mgs obvious as hell?

and all these machines in this game seem to be missing spotlights and floodlights... wouldnt that be needed in a city hunting footsoldiers in ruins?

The biggest thing though... is the conflicting shadows... the building has its face lit but the apricot wall in shadow BUT no shadow cast on the street. The machine on the other had is being lit from above and forward of the front so its nose in lit BUT again... its casting a ground shadow in conflict with all the rest. It all catches the eye and screams somethings wrong here... find it... and that detracts from the otherwise fine work you've done.

Sorry, just a womans take on what I see.

Edited by Keira_NZ, 10 May 2014 - 01:07 PM.

[Bishop Steiner]

Keira_NZ, on 10 May 2014 - 12:54 PM, said:

I like his idea... But the 6 launchers look lost in the big boxes soooooo as they are ever tracking things why not have a blister thing in the middle with all the tracking gear? That would fill out the plain looking boxes.
And make the Shotguns look evil with burnt barrels and the Mgs obvious as hell?

and all these machines in this game seem to be missing spotlights and floodlights... wouldnt that be needed in a city hunting footsoldiers in ruins?

I could see some nice banks of Floods being built in where the Catapult's laser banks currently are. And definitely think a laser/receiver and radar dome would fill the center gap on the launchers nicely.and possibly add some extra floods to the upper/outer corners of the launchers.

possibly along these line

Spoiler

with a few other details like plate lines and bolts to give them a less plain look?

IDK... it's a thin line between suggesting something and stepping on a guys toes, so take this purely as ideas being tossed out to see if any stick, baabaa214

Edited by Bishop Steiner, 10 May 2014 - 01:17 PM.

[Keira RAVEN McKenna]

Bishop Steiner, on 10 May 2014 - 01:03 PM, said:

I could see some nice banks of Floods being built in where the Catapult's laser banks currently are. And definitely think a laser/receiver and radar dome would fill the center gap on the launchers nicely.and possibly add some extra floods to the upper/outer corners of the launchers.

possibly along these line

Spoiler

with a few other details like plate lines and bolts to give them a less plain look?

IDK... it's a thin line between suggesting something and stepping on a guys toes, so take this purely as ideas being tossed out to see if any stick, baabaa214

Sorry, didnt mean to step on toes. Not so hot at diplomacy I guess.
Your suggestions are right on what I was thinking though

[Bishop Steiner]

Keira_NZ, on 10 May 2014 - 03:46 PM, said:

Sorry, didnt mean to step on toes. Not so hot at diplomacy I guess.
Your suggestions are right on what I was thinking though

actually I was referring to my own temerity in the post. As a fellow artist, I can be a little protective of my work, and so I didn't want to come off as a jerk to babaa214, was not in reference to your suggestions at all (which I liked).

[baabaa214]

not offended
no worries