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Darkzone Zulu: A Driftwood Story

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#1 990Dreams

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Posted 16 August 2014 - 08:35 AM

Far into the future, after man has gone beyond the periphery...



DarkZone Zulu

Part one: Objective Alpha

The steady thud of his heart was all that kept him awake at this point in time. This miserable ball of dust floating too far away from it's home star was all too dark, even though it was warm thanks to some internal force of the planet. There was total silence. The same boring trees with a few lakes. A sharp noise pierced his ears. His communicator alerted him that Sam had left a message.

“Sam speaking. We have confirmed your reports of mining and industrialization of this crystal on a large scale. Commander Hurricane created a plan for you to follow so you can secure the crystal and avoid the culmination of enemies. We are using our Houdini device to beam you the Dire Wolf X now. No support can be provided. Sam out.”

The monotony of his voice nearly made him doze off. Then he heard the large displacement of air outside his tent and felt a burst of warm air. He went outside. There he beheld the massive Mech dubbed the “Dire Wolf X.” This machine utilized only the most powerful weapons and electronics. State-of-the-art armor insured him protection in any event. The very look of the Mech had made pilots eject from their Mechs. He began to walk towards and climb the ladder on the Mech's legs and torso that led to it's cockpit.

***



About fifteen minutes had passed. He had already inspected two exhausted crystal sites, and found nothing. Now he was moving to inspect the active crystal site. He slowly approached. He looked through the trees at the top of the hill he was on. There he saw the strange glow of the mystical stone. He recalled reading descriptions of those who described nuclear weapons. They would often describe an unearthly purple flame rising into the sky. He felt as though he were seeing this same, unearthly purple haze surrounding the crystal. The glow seemed to ask the question of why man dared to tamper with this force beyond his knowledge.

His computer broke his trance by stating: “Radar detection: 120 meters, 18 degrees.”

His computer became silent and the holo-projector displayed the radar signature. It was fuzzy, he couldn't make out much. It was not tall, and had many sharp edges. His heart rate increased as the ping of his radar began to vibrate through the cold, empty silence in the cockpit. Even though his Mech was powerful, it did not have enough fast weapons. He triggered his jump-jets and leapt from the treeline.

***



Phantoms. Three of them. He let off a TangoBlue missile at target Alpha, and then turned his focus to beta. He muted the computer's warning about incoming missiles. He had to focus. He was close to range with target Beta. He took aim and let one of his High Frequency Disintegrators rip. The shock-wave missed and the Phantom began to run. The pilot, clearly novice, stopped to fire. He fired twice more. Target Beta exploded and parts of his Mech flew off in all directions. He swiveled his torso to the last Mech. His mere look made the pilot eject. He looked back at Alpha. The ball of blue, high-temperature tungsten clearly found it's target, as now there was nothing but ashes where Alpha was. He took a deep breath to steady himself. His computer alerted him of the situation with two words:

“Objective secured.”

He looked at his HUD. Objective Alpha was secured. His arms were damaged and his left torso had a minor breach. Routine damage, he assumed. Now he needed to repair and move to objectives Beta and Gamma.

*TO BE CONTINUED*



So, this is the first part of my first attempt at writing fiction. A few people may laugh at what I am writing about. A few people may laugh cause I really am not good at writing fiction. But, feedback is, as usual, welcome.

Edited by DavidHurricane, 16 August 2014 - 09:04 AM.


#2 StompingOnTanks

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Posted 16 August 2014 - 09:43 AM

Sounds interesting. I like it! ;)

View PostDavidHurricane, on 16 August 2014 - 08:35 AM, said:

Then he heard the large displacement of air outside his tent and felt a burst of warm air.


I don't claim to be an expert writer and I don't want to put you off, but...

As much as I don't want to be an ass I'm really picky about using the same phrase in a sentence twice unless it's for dramatic effect (like a character repeating a phrase to get a point through). Try something like:

"Then he heard the displacement of air outside and a burst of warmth."

Very interesting twist on the BattleTech lore though. I really would like to see this "Dire Wolf X" of yours. Must be some scary stuff if it causes pilots to eject with one look. :D Also, good job with the fight scene.

Edited by StompingOnTanks, 16 August 2014 - 09:44 AM.


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Posted 16 August 2014 - 11:30 AM

Good story, though a bit from Driftwood itself. May want to credit wolfman and tailgunner/Gunner (the pilot that's supposedly in Darkzone Zulu).

Oh and Dire Wolf X can exterminate armies of Quad Gauss Dire Wolves. Trust me. (9 HFDs, 2 Large X Pulse Lasers, 1 Tangoblue.)

Actually David, if you can, maybe try to contact Wolfman to see if you can do lore and campaign options, as just from this story it's really neat! Maybe he would allow you to write up the storylines for the next campaigns and stuff!

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Posted 16 August 2014 - 11:42 AM

Technology Profile: TangoBlue

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The Tango Blue utilizes the latest technologies in capacitance and plasma containment to create a high heat weapon. Tungsten is plasmafied in the warhead of the missile upon launch, and contained in magnetic glass. When the TangoBlue impacts it's target, the plasma is focused in the direction of the target, vaporizing whatever it hits. State-of-the-art tracking technologies allow it to move around terrain to track it's target. The ammunition payload is extremely high though, each missile weighs almost one ton. The launcher is also large as well.

As per request I will document all weapons that are not in BattleTech canon (yet).

Edited by DavidHurricane, 16 August 2014 - 11:42 AM.


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Posted 16 August 2014 - 03:55 PM

Death's touch is following you.

It has a name; it's TangoBlue

You can run, but you can't hide

It will find you. You will die.



DarkZone Zulu

Part two: Objective Beta, Gamma

He waited in the treeline for a radar contact. Any information he could get before entering battle would be helpful. There was nothing though. Nothing at all. He decided 30 seconds was enough waiting, and leapt over the wall of the base and into combat.

His computer rapidly began to beep as it prioritized and labeled targets. Then a roar pierced Fixed Heavy Thunderbolt Unit fired off two Heavy Thunderbolts. He would have retaliated with his deadly blue missile, but he had to save precious ammunition. Two more Heavy Thunderbolts hit him before an HFD silenced his opponent.

Flashes of colors danced across his armor. Three more Phantoms. He let an HFD rip at target Beta. The arm and part of the side torso flew off and the Mech spun to the ground. He fired again, only to blow off a leg and part of the other arm. These shock-wave weapons were not very reliable for aiming. He fired a third time and Beta burst open in a large explosion. Gamma was hurled to the ground by the explosion and Delta was still running. The Dire Wolf turned to face Delta and leapt with the grace of a deer towards him. One HFD to the head did the job and Delta fell over, dead. Three Large X Pulse Laser shots to Gamma's exposed center torso finished the job.

***


His heart rate began to slow as he moved to capture the gate control, but the battle wasn't over yet. The gate rolled down just as he gained control of the control building. His front-light showed an Elemental falling off the gate as the gate shot up into the air. He knew it wouldn't be long until his enemies got into the base and he quickly secured the spotlight control. The gate exploded as he saw Elementals storm through. Large X Pulse Laser shots got two of the eight little demons scrapped. A TangoBlue soared through the air towards another. Then the fight began. Each Elemental utilized one Heavy Thunderbolt Launcher. Five missiles soared through the air towards him. He shot down one with his lasers and jumped towards his opponents. The missiles found home in his legs and back. He determined this could be a problem. His four charged HFDs destroyed three of the Elementals but one missed. He fired off his Pulse lasers at the one who was furthest from him. One found it's target. He heard a roar behind him, but refused to take his eyes of this target. His lasers ripped through the Elemental and it burst into flames as the ammunition and the pilot inside combusted. He turned on his last opponent and fired his other laser, knocking him over. The Heavy Thunderbolt hadn't yet reached him, so it now found it's home in his front left-leg actuator. His Mech's leg buckled, but he quickly regained his aim and destroyed his last opponent.

***


His computer remained silent even when he captured the other objective, the enemy HQ. He assumed that his radio communicator was broken and that he couldn't communicate with his command ship to verify the completion of the objectives. He moved to the repair bay that was in the base, secured it and jumped onto the loading platform. He initiated controls in the computer room and then moved to the medical room. He had a piece of shrapnel in his left arm. The medical bot numbed him temporarily and removed it, sterilized his wound, and bandaged the cut. The shrapnel was almost 1.5 cm long and over half of it was stuck in his arm. The repair computers beeped and informed him that his Mech was reloaded and repaired. He moved towards the loading platform and prepared to move to his final objectives: Delta and Epsilon.

*TO BE CONTINUED*



I didn't feel as good about this one. It is mostly a combat scene. Also, I just came up with he poem as a filler for the top. It is kinda gonna be the format I use I guess.

Edited by DavidHurricane, 16 August 2014 - 04:03 PM.


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Posted 16 August 2014 - 04:01 PM

Technology Profile: Heavy Thunderbolt Missile

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The Heavy Thunderbolt Missile is not fully developed technology at this time. It is a larger version of the Arrow IV Thunderbolt missile. The launcher is large, but utilizes lighter weight metals to consume less weight, although more space. The missile itself utilizes the same tracking technology as the TangoBlue but uses a faster propulsion system, allowing it to be far more effective. It is capable of inflicting heavy damage to even the heaviest of Mechs, and a skilled pilot can destroy or incapacitate entire limbs with the missile. It does have a low ammo-per-ton rating though, and the missile is loud and fairly obvious.

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Posted 17 August 2014 - 08:47 AM

There is no stop to war. Man has a desire to prove that he is the best. Even in a free market man still wants more. Even as the ruler of all charted territory man desires more. Eventually, one man will kill another and a war will begin just as it has for thousands of years...


DarkZone Zulu

Part three: Objectives Delta, Epsilon

This would be one of his trickiest gigs yet. He had used his long ranged radar to detect the enemies guarding the last two objectives. All he had to do was destroy a WarShip and secure a CargoDropship. The WarShip was off at the moment. A Fixed Thunderbolt Unit guarded the CargoDropship and five Phantoms patrolled the area. The repair bay only gave him stock Ferro-Fibrous armor. He had snuck behind the Fixed Thunderbolt Unit and was preparing to attack when one of the Phantoms look his way. His heart began to thud so loudly e thought they'd hear him. He had been found out.

He fired off a TangoBlue at the target that spotted him and then jumped straight towards the Fixed Thunderbolt unit. He fired off all his HFDs at the WarShip and destroyed it. The Fixed Thunderbolt unit swiveled to face him but he was too close to it already. He refused to take his gaze away from the Fixed Thunderbolt Unit until it was destroyed. The five remaining Phantoms danced around him, firing off lasers and missiles as they went. Ten seconds. One of his HFDs was almost reloaded when one of the phantoms blew it off him. He was about to fire another when it exploded and destroyed a third. Twenty seconds seemed like twenty days. Time slowed and his senses became vivid. He could hear the hum of his HFDs charging. He could see every crest of the laser light that elegantly danced across his Mech's vital areas. He had almost lost a leg and an arm. After another agonizing five seconds he fired off one HFD at the Fixed Thunderbolt Unit. It burst into flames and exploded, throwing his Mech back. He swiveled to face target Gamma and fired off another TangoBlue. Two HFDs ripped through target Delta and another two destroyed Epsilon. He fired his last HFD at target Zeta's leg. It all happened so fast. His Mech's leg gave out just as Zeta stumbled over. He began to limp to long range to try and fire off his last TangoBlue at Zeta. Targeting data showed that Zeta wasn't fully legged and could still run at 66% speed. The Phantom was struggling to stand up. If Zeta managed to get up, he'd be able to destroy the Dire Wolf's last leg and it would be history from there. He was in range. He pulled the trigger and heard the TangoBlue zip off towards its final destination.

***


Back at his tent, he answered Sam's communication.

“This is Sam. Congratulation Gunner. Our enemies will not be able to continue their activities from DarkZone Zulu area. Our scientists have analyzed samples from a black market deal we intercepted days ago. This crystal is unknown and has extraordinary attributes including the ability to serve as an active power source. We will most likely be dealing with these crystals more and more as our enemies continue to mobilize forces to locations we considered of little value prior to our discovery. A shuttle will be here to pick you up in two hours. Sam out.”

Two hours. Gunner decided he would use one and a half of those hours to get some well needed rest. As he rested his head on his bunk's pillow, the steady thud of his heart lulled him to sleep.

And so concludes the adventure in DarkZone Zulu. For those who haven't figured it out, this is a narration of Wolfman's Driftwood mission, DarkZone Zulu. The pilot is Gunner (tailgunner).

Edited by DavidHurricane, 17 August 2014 - 09:25 AM.


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Posted 17 August 2014 - 08:51 AM

Technology Profile: High Frequency Disintegrator

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The High Frequency Disintegrator (HFD) is a prototype sound weapon. Using high-frequency pulses of hyper-sonic shockwaves, the HFD can cripple an assault Mech with one shot. Capable of punching holes in even the thickest armor, the HFD is a short ranged weapon. It also has a very low payload space and generates almost no heat. As a sound weapon, it is not known for being super accurate, and the capacitor takes a long time to charge.

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Posted 17 August 2014 - 08:57 AM

Technology Profile: Dire Wolf X

UAV Camera Drone image of suspected damaged Dire Wolf X in combat:
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The Dire Wolf X is a prototype Dire Wolf chassis. Utilizing the highest quality weapons technology, the Dire Wolf X has nine High Frequency Disintegrators for short range combat. Two Large X Pulse Lasers allow it to fend off enemies at long range. A TangoBlue missile is utilized for a long range death dealing weapon. The Mech also uses a mk. II ECM Suite and Clan Advanced Sensors to ensure a pilot is safe in any situation. The disadvantage of the chassis is that its weapons that deal most of its damage are slow to reload, meaning a pilot must take care in using them.

Edited by DavidHurricane, 17 August 2014 - 09:23 AM.






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