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[Armored Yokai]

April 14 3056 planet Echo,Draconis.Combine As lieutenant Moog finished his lunch break on the neon banshee dropship he payed a visit to his commander,
Amecia. As they began to talk Lt.Moog was worried about his comrades in the icy tundra fighting a crazed bandit group known as the "death monkeys" Cmdr.Amecia started to tell him that they too will soon begin combat with them. within 5 hours their Dropship was bombarded with missles,lasers,ballistics
the emergency alarm rang and a voice on the speaker said "unidentified mechs approaching from the south of our location all personel man your assigned battlestations SilverStreak Squadron go to your mechs and seek your destination" Lieutenant Moog! Private Sams yelled "we must hurry!!!" as Lt.Moog proceeded to his customized Grand Dragon there was an explosion while the Dropship was rumbling with blinking lights private sams jumped in his Bushwacker and yelled to his commander "Do you have a death wish lets go!!"
Lt.Moog ran to his mech and began to start its engine and proceeded to say "ok Silver Streak Squadron we must destroy all opposing forces Sams,Dintro,Mark,Walter,Steven,Miranda,Kiko form up on me and hold fire until we leave the dropship".They left the Dropship and began to run towards the firing mechs in the fog not knowing the certain types of chassis Moog spoke to his Commander on what mechs there were she spoke through the speaker in panic "What in the name of Kerensky! we have 2 assault mechs,2 heavys, and 4 mediums and here are the mechs and
the mechs are a Crockett and a Atlas,Marauder,Warhammer,2 shadowhawks,a Centurion and a Black jack
well we might have a good chance since we have 4 heavys,1 assault,3 mediums
1 Grand Dragon,1 Lancelot,1 Flashman,1 Orion,1 King Crab,1 Centurion,1 Trebuchet,1 bushwacker
we may win and good luck" Moog: "don't worry we will do our best to remove them from our little base"
as moog proceeded with the streaks to the enemies they took cover behind the trees
a group of laser fire aimed for Marks king crab but failed to hit moog yelled out to his team to open fire
and attack the closest target as he fired his UAC 10 and large laser at the torso of the Warhammer the mech fell down with a snap and exploded Dintro said Lucky shot commander but we have a shadow hawk coming our way as he spoke a ac 5 shot out and hit his mechs arm making it turn quickly.Kiko shouted we are being shot at we have to escape this fire or we are dead as his mech ran behind a rock as he turned
back to fire his ac 10 and lrm 10 at the shadow hawks leg damaging it out of nowhere mark fired both of his ac 20s at the shadowhawks center torso the mech was knocked down and as Dintro ran towards the mech to finish the job his mechs arm was shot of by the marauder not caring about it he fired his lrm 15s at the knocked shadow hawk thus blowing it up the marauder then shot both of its ppcs at dintro as his mechs gyro was hit it was knocked down kiko then shot his ac 10 at the marauders center torso making it move back a little while dintro tried getting up he fired his 2 lrms and 1 med laser at the marauders right and center torso
the mech dodged 9 missles and then fell off the hill severly damaged it shot at the centurion kiko was piloting as the ac5 and ppcs hit the centurion ejected due to a ammo explosion worried dintro yelled at kiko and kiko said get him for me filled with joy and anger the trebuchet got up and walked towards the marauder and kicked it rear torso as a big dent was made in the mech dintro then walked backwards 5 steps
and shot the lrms he had left before the missles could hit the mech the pilot ejected.
Sams,walter and stevens then grouped up on the last shadow hawk and the Black jack
Sams shot his ac 10 and large laser at the shadow hawks head killing the pilot the mech stood still waiting for salvage walter then alpha striked the black jacks rear torso knocking it down it fired its medium lasers at the head of the orion knocking walter out and giving him a level 2 injury and
stevens then shot his ppc and 2 large lasers at the mechs rear making it have a amunition explosion
and made the pilot eject. the combatant silver streaks then aimed for the last 3 mechs
Sams,Stevens alpha striked the centurions center torso damaging its engine shutting it down
the crockett fired at stevens mech and destroyed its leg making it prone
the Crockett was aided by the atlas and destoyed stevens mech Miranda then shot at the crocketts arms as she knocked them off the mechs torso the pilot of the mech cursed at her and fired a large laser at he mechs head but instead of hitting it missed the pilot of the crockett then started screaming like a little kid
and then out of pure luck while the pilot was banging the mechs controls he then pressed the wrong button
causing him to eject now all there was left was a Atlas mark then fired all his weapons at the mechs legs and so did the other silver streaks while they had the mechs pilot at gun point they then took his mech and salvaged the many other mechs they then captured all the pilots and had them as POWs they then interogated them and began repairs on their base all was good untill.....to be continued

[MechWarrior4Lover]

Good story but PLEASE fix the spelling and grammar. It's killing me! Also, pressing the wrong button and ejecting isn't possible. To eject, you must pull a lever with quite a bit of force. Not bad though.

Edited by MechWarrior4Lover, 24 December 2011 - 09:37 AM.

[Armored Yokai]

i have bad punctuation and have been told that many times