Holy guacamole, this thread is still alive!
Kyle Travis, on 28 November 2015 - 08:24 AM, said:
Melissa is an interesting character
Can't agree there. I did not find her to be particularly interesting, or much of a character even. And that she was a non-Mechwarrior was just one more way to firmly establish her strictly secondary character. There's a rather cringeworthy scene between her and Lt. Whatshisname where he lectures her about the ugly truths of war or somesuch and then also implies that he won't get in trouble for it because Hanse Davion wouldn't cashier one of his officers over the complaints of a mere non-military woman (who just so happens to be the heir to the Lyran Commonwealth). And it's all played straight.
In the Blood of Kerensky trilogy, she's reduced to asking stupid questions to trigger expository dialogue among male characters, and after Hanse's death, she's killed off almost immediately.
Completely wasted potential with this character, same as with Katrina Steiner.
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looking at historical arranged matches it’s not that improbable that the marriage between her and Hanse actually worked and even flourished. Even large age differences can often work
The problem with that analogy being that arranged marriages between nobles were most decidedly not equal, since they all took part in patriarchal systems. This simply doesn't work for an allegedly gender-equal society as the allegedly enlightened houses of Davion and Steiner are supposed to be.
(Isn't it mildly ironic that the heir of House Kurita - which the other novels spare no effort in painting as backwards and woman-hating - marries a halfway respectable, even badass, female character who actually has scenes and a role apart from him?)
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and it is obvious they both worked hard on their relationship.
No, it's just obvious that the writers decided that this teenaged girl would of course be totes in love with their flawless shining hero, Hanse Davion, because he is so flawless and shining. (And don't give me any BS about he
wasn't a flawless shining hero because they ostentatiously mentioned how he often "resorted" to trickery. These are in fact, positive characterisations with a dash of faux-humility. Among the oldest writing tricks in the book. Heh.)
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Given who she was both mother and daughter would have been at worst resigned to her marriage being political
Actually, there shouldn't be any reason for that. Katrina (according to the backstory) married purely out of love. Both she and her daughter are allegedly strong, independent females in a society which allegedly is gender equal. The appropriate response to the first suggestion of Hanse marrying Melissa should have been:
KS: "What are, some kind of pervert? She's twelve years old, by Blake!"
HD: "Oh, that's okay, I'll wait until she is eighteen..."
KS: "Listen up, if you don't drop the subject of you marrying my daughter
right now, you risk irreparable damage to our tentative alliance. And your testicles, I should add. It's not going to help, anyway. Ascending to the rulership in the Lyran Commonwealth depends a lot more on Estates General support than on lineage - I should know - and I don't see how the Estates General are going to support Melissa when they see her as being firmly under your thumb as they inevitably and rationally will."
... that is, if Katrina was not also a dumb secondary character with a "peace" schtick, but none of the drive and power consciousness a ruler with her history should realistically have. Her main positive characterisation is that she recognizes how great Hanse Davion is (this is written almost verbatim in sourcebooks.)
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For me it was a little sad that the writers tended to focus on the Federated Suns expertise in “everything” - especially the NAIS - when the earlier sourcebooks have equally interesting and important technological developments in the Lyran Commonwealth on the way.
Well... yes. That actually ties into the problems with the characters. Hanse Davion was setting's hero, and both he and his realm had to be the best at absolutely everything. A problem which was seeded very early on, but only ever became worse as the universe was fleshed out.
Edited by Koshirou, 17 December 2015 - 08:26 AM.