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#1 Livaria

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 01:26 PM

The Little Red Raven.

Once upon a time, there was a little red ravenPosted Image who lived in quickplay. She was friends with a lazy MaddogPosted Image, a sleepy ShadowcatPosted Image, and a noisy yellow griffinPosted Image.

One day, the little red ravenPosted Image found two LRM boats. The little red ravenPosted Image had an idea. She would ambush them.

The little red ravenPosted Image asked her friends, "Who will help me flank at H9?"

"Not I," barked the lazy MaddogPosted Image.
"Not I," purred the sleepy Shadowcat.Posted Image
"Not I," screeched the noisy yellow griffinPosted Image.

"Then I will," said the little red ravenPosted Image. So the little red ravenPosted Image ambushed the LRM boats all by herself.

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When the team was headed towards a poor defensive location, the little red ravenPosted Image asked her friends, "Should we tell our team?"

"No point," barked the lazy MaddogPosted Image.
"No point," purred the sleepy Shadowcat.Posted Image
"No point," screeched the noisy yellow griffinPosted Image.

"Then I will," said the little red ravenPosted Image. So the little red ravenPosted Image took command all by herself.

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When the little red ravenPosted Image found an undefended passage that leads to the enemy. The little red ravenPosted Image told her friends, "Who is going to push through D6 with me?"

"Pew, Pew," barked the lazy MaddogPosted Image.
"Pew, Pew," purred the sleepy Shadowcat.Posted Image
"Huh?!" screeched the noisy yellow griffinPosted Image.

"Then I will," said the little red ravenPosted Image. So the little red ravenPosted Image took the tactical advantage all by herself.

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The tired little red ravenPosted Image asked her friends, "Can someone else take lead?"


*Silence* came from the lazy MaddogPosted Image.
*Silence* came from the sleepy ShadowcatPosted Image.
*Silence* came from the noisy yellow griffinPosted Image.

"...Okay," said the little red ravenPosted Image. So the little red raven carried on all by herself.
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When today's final game was about to end in defeat, the tired little red ravenPosted Image asked her friends, "How can we do better?"


"S*** team," barked the lazy MaddogPosted Image.
"S*** team," purred the sleepy Shadowcat.Posted Image
"S*** team," screeched the noisy yellow GriffinPosted Image.

When the match ended, The little red RavenPosted Image said nothing. And left the unit all by herself.

Edited by Livaria, 08 June 2017 - 01:30 PM.


#2 Alistair Winter

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 01:56 PM

The new generation of children need stories with strong moral fiber in order to learn how to play games on the internet.

How's that for a business idea?

"The little engine that could look at the minimap."
"The whiner in the willows."

#3 Jay Leon Hart

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 02:28 PM

I like it, but you need more alliteration!

Green Griffin?
Melancholy Mad Dog?

#4 Felicitatem Parco

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 02:29 PM

View PostAlistair Winter, on 08 June 2017 - 01:56 PM, said:

The new generation of children need stories with strong moral fiber in order to learn how to play games on the internet.

How's that for a business idea?

"The little engine that could look at the minimap."
"The whiner in the willows."


Goldilocks and the three LRM Spiritbears.
LegHumpty Dumpty


#5 Linkin

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 03:11 PM

Haha, great thread.

Oooh, all of these stories could be put into the Academy, and narrated by Captain What's His Face in the Atlas! There's a better NPE for you Posted Image

#6 Jiang Wei

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 04:37 PM

Yet, the other team won without a little red raven.

#7 Kiiyor

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 05:03 PM

View PostJay Leon Hart, on 08 June 2017 - 02:28 PM, said:

I like it, but you need more alliteration!

Green Griffin?
Melancholy Mad Dog?

I DIG IT.

"Good Game", the greedy green Griffon garrumphed.
The Mad Dog mumbled maliciously, melancholy that he had to maintain his own locks.

#8 Cub

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 05:46 PM

Haha, fantastic bed time story, love it!

#9 Wil McCullough

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 05:54 PM

I logged in just to like this.

#10 N0ni

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 07:31 PM

Still on hiatus while once in awhile checking the forums...

... but i feel like this story is like some fan-made RWBY episode.

You have the little red Raven (Ruby).

The lazy Mad Dog (Weiss, laziness probably came from being sick of playing board games with Ruby and just doesn't want to do anything but rest).

The sleepy Shadowcat (Blake, not sure about sleepy but shadow and cat yes.)

And the noisy yellow Griffin (Yang, packs a punch and not exactly a quiet fighter).


I just hope Ruby never splits from the team and goes on her own.

#11 LordNothing

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 09:32 PM

i like how you included pictures so even the worst t5 potatos and mediocre t3 players can follow along with the story, well done.

#12 InvictusLee

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 10:23 PM

I love this ^_^

#13 Jay Leon Hart

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Posted 09 June 2017 - 09:22 AM

View PostN0ni, on 08 June 2017 - 07:31 PM, said:

I just hope Ruby never splits from the team and goes on her own.

Did you, erm, watch the latest season?

#14 ZippySpeedMonkey

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Posted 09 June 2017 - 09:53 AM

Still a better story than Twilight....

I look forward to you're next story...

The 3 Little Pugs...

Edited by ZippySpeedMonkey, 09 June 2017 - 09:53 AM.


#15 N0ni

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Posted 10 June 2017 - 06:23 AM

View PostJay Leon Hart, on 09 June 2017 - 09:22 AM, said:

Did you, erm, watch the latest season?

Yes, and last i checked she's still part of some sort of team whether it be RWBY or RNJR. Hell, RWBY is going to meet up in Vol. 5 in Mistral.





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