sCOREscream, on 05 April 2018 - 11:47 PM, said:
Here now my new MWO-Movie: the REBORN of Clan WidowMaker, the truth !
Based on the lore and history of our great Lore Master Doddster
Created for ALL MechWarriors and BattleTech friends,
as recruiting movie and film adaptation of our history of Lore Master Doddster.
The whole story to read on the Clan WidowMaker Homepage "How the WidowMakers were reborn!"
Thanks and have fun:
https://youtu.be/6FO7aQImV1k
I like your video explaining the Rebirth of Clan Widowmaker, however, there are a few things that should be asked and explored.
1. The Clans had banned the Widowmaker symbol for the death of ilKhan Nicolas Kerensky, along with the Karriage and Vodermark bloodnames. If the rest of the Clans found out about a resurrection, they would give the Widowmakers a death sentence as bandits.
2. The reason of why Clan Widowmaker was absorbed is because of the butchering of their labor caste. What would be the Loremaster's justification for that? Were the Wolves lying outright? Were the civilian caste Wolf spies trying to incite unrest on the Widowmakers? What is their reason?
3. The Shadows - I understand that the Shadows are supposed to be the descendants of Clan Widowmaker, but shouldn't they cover their tattoos in places that wouldn't be recognized like the shoulders or head (as the hair could grow to cover up the tattoos) or ink over logo with other tattoos? The last thing the Shadows would want is for the Wolves to ask questions about their tattoos and to have their plan be jeopardized.
4. Clan Widowmaker's views to the Inner Sphere - As a believer of "suspension of disbelief", I can buy that Natasha Kerensky formed the Black Widow Company as a staging unit for the resurgent Widowmaker Clan. But during the time in the Wolf's Dragoons, what would be the Shadow's views of the Inner Sphere? Are they doing this as a redemption to make up for their past mistakes or it is a change of heart where they think, "Oh man we thought the Inner Sphere were barbarians, but they are not as bad as we were lead to believe. They deserve better than what the other clans would offer them." Maybe the Wolf's Warden viewpoints were rubbing off them. Who knows?
So far, I like where the story is going, but it needs to be fleshed out more.
Edited by Will9761, 15 April 2018 - 02:28 PM.