IqfishLP, on 31 August 2013 - 02:52 PM, said:
The horriffic letters "No signal" showed up in his Cockpit.
"Echelon 2 are you hearing me? Echelon 2 I repeat! John, Carter, Katlyn, anyone?"
He just heard static noises.
"Guys, we lost Echelon 2. Stay close, we are getting out of here!" he said into the microfone, his voice fulfilled with fear.
"Affirmative" he heard 3 voices saying.
They ran for their lifes. Speeding with almost 150 kilometers per hour his lance crushes through the woods of the battlefield.
"Warning, incoming missile"
"****! Incoming, get cover and activate AMS!"
It was almost to late. He could see the swarm of the Clan LRMs raining down on his Raven, but the main salvo was just about to come.
"Run! Activate MASC, we habe to get out of here!!"
"I'm doing my best sir, but - cchhhrrrrrr"
He could see Sgt. Marc Bennett's Raven tripping over and falling into the muddy ground. But he could also see the Evacuation Seat rising up into the dark sky.
Suddenly, the LRMs stopped. And the Mortar Fire stopped too.
He looked in the direction where the enemy fire was coming from and saw three big explosions. These kind of explosions exploding Clan Reactors do when they are completely destroyed.
"This is 1st Leutnant Walther Hoffmann, 1st Company of the Tamar Jägers. We are here to save your Davion a**es. Ladies and Gentleman, sit back and enjoy the firework."
A gigantic explosion shook their mechs...

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