WarHippy, on 11 November 2014 - 01:17 PM, said:
I read just fine thanks. My statement to you was based off of what you said to me, anything you said later was not directed at me and something I was not commenting on. Pretty simple concept. That being said there is a difference between the canon provided by the books and the fluff used in the books to describe a scene. What is canon are the events that took place and the people taking part. Fluff on the other hand is any time the author was trying to paint a pretty picture in your mind by describing a scene. It sounds better to say "I savaged the enemy Centurion with a stream of fire from my AC rocking him backwards" then it does to say "I shot the guy with my big gun, and it looks like it hurt".
Yeah, and if you were at all interested in engaging in an actual dialogue with me, you would have at least skimmed my other posts, most of which are fairly close together and do not require much scrolling or page turning.
As far as your sentence examples go, that is description and is something that is necessary and proper to good storytelling.
In the books, "savaging" a Mech did not always kill it. Indeed, sometimes the "savaged" Mech took considerably more punishment before finally dying. Other times, usually author-dependent, the savaging would utterly annihilate the Mech in question.
That being said, I've already discussed fluff and such with Joseph Mallen in a very pleasant manner, and am enjoying the discussion we are having. I do not feel inclined to enter into such a discussion with you given your utter lack of initiative and condescending attitude. Good day.