Yosharian, on 27 September 2013 - 09:42 AM, said:
I thought I'd rewrite this, something tells me English is not your native language, and some of the story doesn't make a lot of sense. No offence; your story was still interesting =p
He clambered onto the mangled Atlas corpse and gazed across its wrecked body, a solemn expression on his face. Locating what used to be the cockpit, he fell to his knees and searched carefully, a particular prize on his mind. Unable to place his cut and bruised hands on the treasure he searched for, he flung the useless wreckage in his grasp away and fell back into contemplation of the day's events. Supposing that the intercepted transmission were true, what hellish thing, what unforeseen and extraordinary calamity could have occurred moments after father and son separated? What could have caused such destruction in the few moments between their parting, and, drawn back by his screaming static, the discovery of his shattered 'mech? The Stalker pilot had searched in vain to ascertain the nature of his father's injuries. One thing was certain: this murder had been performed in cold blood.
Hehehe, personally, I've just gotten use to the strange sentencing structure these stories seem to use.
warner2, on 27 September 2013 - 09:06 AM, said:
It's about time you created a way of gracefully clearing the queues so that you can restart those servers.
Or, I don't know, you could try to use your memory, and recall this happens EVERY week, so dropping just before 1pm Eastern or 11am Western (North American time) is you're own dang fault. Also, as stated, UI2.0 is supposed to fix this.