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#61 LastKhan

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:09 AM

View PostGonaDie, on 30 March 2016 - 08:52 AM, said:

Tho there is one thing I noticed on closer inspection.The barrel of the gauss rifle on the right arm looks misaligned when compared to the rest of the arm.The same goes for the lower part of the left leg.Everything else is perfect!


hmm yea it does seem off, hope this edit fixed that somewhat.

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Edited by LastKhan, 30 March 2016 - 09:09 AM.


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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:14 AM

View PostLastKhan, on 30 March 2016 - 09:09 AM, said:


hmm yea it does seem off, hope this edit fixed that somewhat.

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Yeah, it helped.

It's hard to keep all those lines perfectly aligned, I have the same problem.Rotating the paper helps a bit, but I still haven't found a proper technique to avoid this.

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:15 AM

View PostGonaDie, on 30 March 2016 - 09:14 AM, said:

Yeah, it helped.

It's hard to keep all those lines perfectly aligned, I have the same problem.Rotating the paper helps a bit, but I still haven't found a proper technique to avoid this.


Yea ive said that i was having issues with the legs / feet so wouldnt surprise me if anything was off and needed to be edited. lol

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:22 AM

View PostLastKhan, on 30 March 2016 - 09:15 AM, said:


Yea ive said that i was having issues with the legs / feet so wouldnt surprise me if anything was off and needed to be edited. lol

Just wanted to point that out, so that you could improve on it.The legs look very solid, good job on them.

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:25 AM

View PostGonaDie, on 30 March 2016 - 09:22 AM, said:

Just wanted to point that out, so that you could improve on it.The legs look very solid, good job on them.


Thanks man and i appreciate the criticism. :)

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:25 AM

View PostLastKhan, on 30 March 2016 - 09:25 AM, said:


Thanks man and i appreciate the criticism. Posted Image

You're welcome, mate Posted Image

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Posted 31 March 2016 - 11:45 PM

I've a question for the artists. Would you consider coloring in your artwork? In the case of the Nightstar you could do it in the Wolf's Dragoons colors for http://www.sarna.net...Shelly_Brubaker or whatever colors would be appropriate for http://www.sarna.net...ancred_Sandoval

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 03:52 AM

Nope. I don't have the equipment or the skills needed.Besides, I need to finish it first (3rd attempt, hope it works this time)

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 08:53 AM

View PostGonaDie, on 01 April 2016 - 03:52 AM, said:

Nope. I don't have the equipment or the skills needed.Besides, I need to finish it first (3rd attempt, hope it works this time)


3rd? Oh man, what happened to #2? Stay positive man.

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 09:14 AM

View PostTheArisen, on 01 April 2016 - 08:53 AM, said:

3rd? Oh man, what happened to #2? Stay positive man.

It was pretty good actually.I got the torso right, but the legs are...oh man, you have no idea...So I felt like It could use another pass.Gotta get dem legs right.

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 12:37 PM

View PostGonaDie, on 01 April 2016 - 09:14 AM, said:

It was pretty good actually.I got the torso right, but the legs are...oh man, you have no idea...So I felt like It could use another pass.Gotta get dem legs right.
Well I certainly appreciate the dedication. :) I'm sure it'll be a masterpiece when it's finished.

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 08:42 PM

View PostTheArisen, on 01 April 2016 - 12:37 PM, said:

Well I certainly appreciate the dedication. Posted Image I'm sure it'll be a masterpiece when it's finished.

Well, I gave a promise.Gotta finish it.I don't think it will be a masterpiecePosted Image , but I hope that it will be an improvment.
4th pass may be needed.The skecth doesn't look very solid, but some refining could fix it.We'll see.

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 08:44 PM

View PostGonaDie, on 01 April 2016 - 08:42 PM, said:

Well, I gave a promise.Gotta finish it.I don't think it will be a masterpiecePosted Image , but I hope that it will be an improvment.
4th pass may be needed.The skecth doesn't look very solid, but some refining could fix it.We'll see.


Keep at it man. dont be afraid to start over when its not working out.

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 10:59 PM

View PostGonaDie, on 01 April 2016 - 08:42 PM, said:

Well, I gave a promise.Gotta finish it.I don't think it will be a masterpiecePosted Image , but I hope that it will be an improvment.
4th pass may be needed.The skecth doesn't look very solid, but some refining could fix it.We'll see.


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Posted 02 April 2016 - 02:45 AM

View PostLastKhan, on 01 April 2016 - 08:44 PM, said:


Keep at it man. dont be afraid to start over when its not working out.

5 doodles and counting so far(never needed more than 2 before).The amount of suck within this mech is overwhelming.But I'll finish it sooner or later, just need to get the angle right.

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Posted 05 April 2016 - 06:27 PM

View PostGonaDie, on 02 April 2016 - 02:45 AM, said:

5 doodles and counting so far(never needed more than 2 before).The amount of suck within this mech is overwhelming.But I'll finish it sooner or later, just need to get the angle right.


I'm sort of afraid to ask... But, how's it going?

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Posted 06 April 2016 - 03:03 AM

View PostTheArisen, on 05 April 2016 - 06:27 PM, said:

I'm sort of afraid to ask... But, how's it going?

It's going well.I chose a different angle and stuff started working out.I have started sketching details, but there is still a lot of work to be done.

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Posted 06 April 2016 - 09:14 AM

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Progress so far.There is still a lot to be done, but I should finish it soon.

Edited by GonaDie, 06 April 2016 - 09:14 AM.


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Posted 07 April 2016 - 09:50 AM

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Posted 07 April 2016 - 01:02 PM

View PostKrigg, on 07 April 2016 - 09:50 AM, said:

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Ohhh very nice!





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