Tarogato said:
Updated head/cockpit mockup
Mockup Credits to:
Axeface
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Personal head critique
Ignoring small details, as those always have to be simplified for the final product and are understandable:
#1. Front, center window is too large/has too sharp a slant.
#2. Center/bottom side windows are more triangular than rectangular.
#3. Side window shapes (mostly the center and bottom ones, top ones are pretty close) are off.
#4. Curved 'helmet' design on the side was changed into a straight rectangular cut out. (Which changes the overall look of the design significantly)
#5. The side piece between the mouth/ear along the front/bottom sides are too large/thick, both height on the sides, and width in the front. (This along with create a much different looking head than the concept)
#6. Overall, the head is much taller. (Combination of #5 and the misshapen windows could both contribute to this.)
#7. Mouth is too tall (bottom of head to bottom of center window)
#8. The front of the face (forehead to mouth) is much more flat than hexagonal.
#9. Windows are much more flush with the rest of the head instead of slightly recessed, including the piece between the ceeks. (Is that also a window in between the 2 'cheek' pieces? Its the same material/coloring if you look...)
#10. Armor plate above center window changed from a Hexagon shape to more of a Shell shape. (More than likely due to a combination of #1, #5, #7 and #8.)
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Since people have made this an issue, while Axeface's concept shows the general corrections on the major and second major issues with the Enforcer (main being the head), the concept does indeed have the head rotated backward a little more which would have to be taken care of by the modelers. Axeface has done a great job with simple image editing and here a comparison image of the concept/model to show that he's very close, it just needs some positioning adjustment and minor details (such as the cockpit window being depressed a bit).
Tarogato, on 11 February 2015 - 12:10 AM, said:
Edited by MauttyKoray, 11 February 2015 - 06:26 PM.